Creative Exchange

Born December 14
Michael Owen
Vanessa Hudgens

Born December 15
ME!!
Gustave Eiffel
ME!!
J. Paul Getty
ME!!
Brendan Fletcher
ME!!!

:)

Well, I'm home. In Barbados. Just got here. It is SO HOT! I've got to go run around like a headless chicken soon, so this is just a quickie.

I went to my first creative exchange on Saturday. You know I've been 'in a critiquing relationship' with ElbieNY25, but this was my first time taking my poor lamb to the group slaughter.

It went pretty well.

Negatives:
A little wordy
Too many things introduced at once
Need to explain certain things if it's for the US market (which right now it isn't)

Positives:
Great chapter endings
Natural dialog
Great voice

OMG! The FIRST thing said about my work was that it has great voice. Excuse me while I go have a heart attack. Or melt, considering that I left -4 degree (Celsius) weather yesterday and it's like 24 here.